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Rich209

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Nice piece. Liked your transitions and everything flowed well. One thing to just consider in the future is maybe using more variety in the melody. You had the same progression going for pretty much the entire piece, which is fine, but if you really want to keep the listener more engaged you need more variety on that front.

Pandasticality responds:

il note this tip up, thank you for your review, really helps.
- Pandasticality

Overall I liked it. I really enjoyed it 0:35 and was sad that was the only time you used that. I think your piece could use more bass though and the melody at 1:10 was a bit odd. 1:10 started out fine and really liked the chord you went to at 1:20, but at 1:26 that chord was questionable, because it just didn't sound right. Anyways enjoyed it.

Interesting piece. It's pleasant on the ears and has some nice chords, but it is all over the place. It is almost random at best, so I would consider fleshing out a actual structure. Also maybe use more variety in rhythm. Overall I think you have a decent start.

asid61 responds:

Thank you! I was mainly looking at the chords here and seeing if I have somewhere to go. Just an idea right now.

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